I handed out a modified feedback form to two teaching colleagues who would be interested in learning how to create digital stories and who are interested also in learning how to make them explore social issues (close enough to ‘dilemmas’). Overall the comments seem to be that our site (http://www.digitalstory.erithacus.org) is a positive artefact (although as colleagues the pressure to state positives might be large).
The first reviewer had no problem with the content but felt that the overall look and design of the web pages could be improved (considerably?). For instance:
- The home page is bland.
- Many pages have sidebar spaces but nothing in them, ‘feels like something is missing’.
- A better description of some of the web pages would be better. For instance DST in education, is ‘really short and feels almost useless’.
This reviewer ended by saying:
I thought it was really interesting and also something that to some extent could be used for primary school. All my comments have to do with the form and not with the content. I don’t have the beginning of a clue when it comes to creating websites (Technology is sadly starting to make me feel old already) but I think that a more interactive layout might help convince readers that this is the way to go. If there was a way to design the website (or at least the homepage) for the reader to actually briefly experience DST, it would be a great help.
The second reviewer had more to say about the content.
On the page that we used to demonstrate ‘two voices’ we put in a YouTube video of a poem performed by two poets telling the same story from their point of view. The reviewer stated:
As much as I loved “An origin story”, I didn’t think it was a great example of a ‘dilemma’ which is what I understand was the point of this section. It seems to be there more for the entertainment value…I get that it’s ‘two-voices’ talking about the same incident.
I think you could find a more helpful example.
Which is a fair comment. Without wanting to sound defensive, the reason we could not find a more relevant example was because we cannot find one. This is a ‘brand new’ way of using digital story telling. We had initially wanted to create our own stories to highlight this, but ran out of time.
Overall this reviewer stated:
I don’t understand the purpose of the ‘keeping it real’ section of the course. It refers to ‘these pages’…does that mean the rest of the course? I felt like I was missing something.
‘Miscellaneous’ doesn’t make me want to look it up…classdojo seems to be suited to a younger age group than secondary students (so I did look it up 😉 )
I think that the ‘storyboard’ included in your blog is great…and would be really helpful to educators implementing this process for the first time.
This is a missing page, it was supposed to have focussed on the idea of keeping the essence of the stories ‘real’ and not allowing a template format (similar to the ‘Death by Powerpoint’ bullet point template phenomena) to predominate. There were examples in the literature but it is something that needs more time and are to curate the kind of examples that we needed to demonstrate this. ‘Less haste – more speed!’
Thank you to both anonymous reviewers of our site (but I know how you are!).
The evaluation form we used: